World:

• Women are not allowed individuality.
• All households have a man to watch over them.
• Women are not allowed outside they have to stay inside while men do the jobs.
• The women are attached to the house by an anklet which is attached to a bar which runs the distance of the house.
• Women have no say in this world.
• No women are allowed to see another woman.
• Men are allowed to go out with other men but women are still supervised by a system watched over by a bigger authority which is still all men.

Outside:

• When she finally makes it outside there is not a women insight.
• Everything seems normal, the trees are big and beautiful, green grass everywhere.
• When you look closer you actually find that things are made out of dead women like the pathways are just women pressed into the concrete.

Ideas:

• She has to get out before he gets back but doesn’t mention him, use time is running out
• Saying how she trips on her chain to illude that she is on a chain. She tries to get outside. When she gets outside she sees something crazy.
• Use this word: Tethered to a rail on the walls which surrounded the whole of the house.

Tips:

• Continue to use, first-person
• Use language structures
• Drop into a place
• Read past stories